Okay, insha'Allah I've reviewed the article to the end of 'shura' in a bit more detail and insha'Allah I'll do the remainder later. For now, here's what I would suggest insha'Allah:
My daughter, I bought you a phone and laptop for your personal use because I trust you will use them conscientiously and that Allah Ta'aala will guide you in your decisions when doing so, I still fear Shaytaan's meddling and fear for your innocence. You will forever be "my little daughter" and nothing will change that. No matter how many times I am told how you are all grown up now, as your father I will always be protective and look out for you. I can't help it so forgive the silliness of this old man!
I love you and I care dearly about you. I was there when you were born, I called the Adhan in your ear, and I took you home on your first day; so, I can't help it... By Allah! I can't help but to look out for you!
We may have some differences of opinion and Allah (SWT) has given you the right to an opinion and to exercise it. Despite our disagreements, I will NEVER stand in your way but I would want you to go about taking decisions the right way.
...don't...
delete 'the' and add a comma after 'books' to read: "...then it moved into books, and the keys..."
[quote]My daughter, know that authentic knowledge will be taken away by the passing away of sincere Ulamah and Mashaykh and the misguided fools will take over their place.
My daughter, know that authentic knowledge will be taken away by the passing of sincere Ulamah and Mashaykh and that misguided fools will take over in their place.
[quote]Truly, Allah does not remove Sacred Knowledge by taking it out of servants, but rather by taking back the souls of Islamic scholars [in death], until, when He has not left a single scholar, the people take the ignorant as leaders, who are asked for and who give Islamic legal opinion without knowledge, misguided and misguiding [Bukhari]
Is this a direct quote?
[quote]My advice would be incomplete if I don't leave you with the details of some Ulamah and Mashaykh whom you can contact and seek guidance from...(SWT).
My advice would be incomplete if I didn't leave you with the details of some Ulamah and Mashaykh who are trusted by other Ulamah and Mashaykh and whom you can contact for guidance.
[quote]... You should use your online presence and publicise this information with the intention of seeking the pleasure of Allah (SWT).
What did you mean to say here? It is not clear. Perhaps you can re-word it a little.


